Dottie resented her husband. He had created the relationship he wanted and trapped her in it. He didn’t listen to her. He didn’t care about her feelings. He wanted a cheerleader. Someone to support him while needing no support of her own. Someone who valued herself, so he didn’t have to. He wanted someone to impress […]
The Outcast Part I-An Introduction of Sorts
September 22, 2013 2 Comments
I have no problem writing the middle of the book or the ending, but I’m having trouble with the beginning. I want it to be from her point of view, but I’m not sure if this is the way to do it. Any critique is welcome. I’m twenty-one years old, in my last year of […]